Thursday, December 2, 2010
Christmas day.
Hello my name is Tiny Tim I'm a boy who has a leg problem but I don't worry mom and dad say thing will get better, I hope they are right. Well lets get to the point today Christmas day we where all sitting down to dinner when we heard someone down in the living room. Then Mr. Scrooge came bursting in the room with a smile on his face. Father looked happy,sad,and confused all at the same time. Later Mr. Scrooge told me that he would got the best doctors he could find and that I wouldn't have to use a stick if you can even call it that. He also told us about his dream and the ghosts. I don't know if he really beheld the ghosts in his room or if it was all in his head but i don't think it was i his head but even if it was I'm glad it happened. Marry Christmas and a happy New Year every one.
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A little misspellings but overall it was good
ReplyDeletemisspelled and Scrooge did not come to the Cratchit's house on Christmas. He actually went to his nephews
ReplyDeleteWell thought of, but there were some typos
ReplyDeleteNice Job Lizzy:Justin Kier some typos
ReplyDeleteCool
ReplyDeleteLots of typos but good
ReplyDeleteWere is the pic other than that nice job:):):)SUZIe
ReplyDeletelots of typos :(:(:(:(:( emma
ReplyDeleteWonderful use of descriptive words and I like that you did so well writing from the point of Tinnny Tim's point of view.
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